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Thursday, September 9, 2021

we should not have junk food in school

 Hi I am Freya if you did not know me and I am going to show you why we should not have junkfood at school


There should not be any treats at school


Did you know that you will go really high that is not that good for what you are doing and

you school day  you will not have a enough energy to keep you going on your school

day there are other better options like sandwiches

fruit the list  keep .you  will be able to think a bit better the list goes on


  it might make you feel really sick image smiling in a school photo

and you had to show your teeth you would might have to go to the dentist how

much you eat Why would you want to eat treats at

school  it might be a rule not if it is you will break the rule


 do you want to be sick and not go to school And good food makes you feel good

when you need it it is also healthy you should not have it before school you could

have it for lunch if it is a chocolate biscuit   


What makes health the best is because it is nice  to eat when you

don’t feel good andyou could have more than two pieces of fruit .


Why don’t you save them for a special occasion like a birthday it is also good

for your health and brain you might get told off 

 






 

1 comment:

  1. Hi Freya,
    I love your writing! You have convinced me to not have junk food in my lunch at school with your amazing reasons. Next time remember capital letters at the beginning of your paragraphs and sentences. Keep up the awesome work!
    - Beth

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