Hi I am Freya if you did not know me and I am going to show you why we should not have junkfood at school
There should not be any treats at school
Did you know that you will go really high that is not that good for what you are doing and
you school day you will not have a enough energy to keep you going on your school
day there are other better options like sandwiches
fruit the list keep .you will be able to think a bit better the list goes on
it might make you feel really sick image smiling in a school photo
and you had to show your teeth you would might have to go to the dentist how
much you eat Why would you want to eat treats at
school it might be a rule not if it is you will break the rule
do you want to be sick and not go to school And good food makes you feel good
when you need it it is also healthy you should not have it before school you could
have it for lunch if it is a chocolate biscuit
What makes health the best is because it is nice to eat when you
don’t feel good andyou could have more than two pieces of fruit .
Why don’t you save them for a special occasion like a birthday it is also good
for your health and brain you might get told off
Hi Freya,
ReplyDeleteI love your writing! You have convinced me to not have junk food in my lunch at school with your amazing reasons. Next time remember capital letters at the beginning of your paragraphs and sentences. Keep up the awesome work!
- Beth